vapour field takes notice of crystal shape

An example of metaphor and anthropomorphism in writing about science:

"Once the basic shape of the embryonic crystal has been determined by migration of molecules on its surfaces, the vapour field around the crystal takes notice and orients itself to conform to the crystal geometry and tends to maintain it."

Prof. B. J. Mason

Mason, B. J. (1966). On the shapes of snow crystals. A commentary on Kepler's essay 'On the Six-Cornered snowflake'. In A New Year's Gift. Or, on the six-cornered snowflake (pp. 47-56). Oxford University Press.

The reference to migration of molecules might be seen as a dead metaphor. Migration orignally referred to movement of people, and later animals – but much later also become used to refer to movementsof ions or molecules (OED).

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snowflake imitates precisely the skeleton of the octahedron

An historical example of simile in science writing:

"Why then, does it happen that as a snowflake falls before it is flattened, it should imitate precisely the skeleton (so to say) of the octahedron with its three feathered diameters that intersect at right angles? Join up the neighbouring tips of the radii with twelve straight lines, and you will represent the complete solid of an octahedron."

Johannes Kepler

Kepler, J. (1966). A New Year's Gift. Or, on the six-cornered snowflake (C. Hardie, Trans.). Oxford University Press. (Original Latin edition, 1611)

[I am not sure if 'feathered' as used here counts as a metaphor. It does not seem to refer directly to bird feathers, but may link to 'edges' or even arrows (pointing along what we would call cartesian axes).]

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